My commercial review

            I think I did a great job creating a persuasive commercial. But I had some help with a few of my friends. We did have to do acouple of redos. Also the camera we were using didn't cooperate. But all in all Ithink we did great.

NEW PRODUCT NEEDED!!!!!!!!!!

              I am trying to create a new product called Play Station Portable Camera or known as PSPC for short. You know how the camera takes up the attachment space. Well now there is a built in camera. No more need for looking for the camera attachment. Also evrey picture you take  you can include it in your game.

holiday triditions

Diwali is an Indian holiday. On Diwali we celebrate because it is the festival of lights. We put lit candles on the sides of our door steps. The house are filled with light and activity. We call up people we know and wish them a happy Diwali. Some times we paint foot prints to show where lord Lakshmi should go. Another thing we do is that we create a prayer stand so we can pray to lord Lakshmi on Diwali. Once the stand is set my family brings a piece of paper with Ravan's ten heads on it. On the piece of paper we sprinkle a special red paint. That means we are asking Ravan for his wisdom.

A few things you should know about me

A few things you should know about me are that I am great with game systems. Also that I am a great swimmer. Another thing you might want to know about me is that my leat favorite subject is English. ( I still do my best in english.) But I love to read mystery, fiction, and adventureours books.

Holiday Triditions

Diwali is an Indian holiday. On Diwali we celebrate because it is the festival of lights. We put lit candles on the sides of our door steps. The house are filled with light and activity. We call up people we know and  wish them a happy Diwali. Some times we paint foot prints to show where lord Lakshmi should go. Another thing we do is that we create a prayer stand so we can pray to lord Lakshmi on Diwali. Once the stand is set my family brings a piece of  paper with  Ravan's ten heads on it. On the piece of paper we sprinkle a special red paint. That means we are asking Ravan for his wisdom.

Are You Proud of Your Country?

As children we should be proud to be born in the United States of America. Not many people are lucky to come to the United States. To be an American is a privilege. People are willing to give their life just to come to the United States.

            The main reason people want to come to the United States is because of freedom. Not many countries get the freedom the United States has. In fact when I go to other countries I tell about the freedom United States has and that the other country doesn’t. Our freedom is a privilege that we fight for. I feel proud to have that privilege.

            We have a great army to protect us. The Marines are always ready for a quick defense or attack. The Navy with their ships and submarines stop intruders and keep harm from coming to civilians. The Air Force brings down enemy planes and attacks with great force. My favorite team, the United States Seals invades enemy territory and brings down terrorists. And then there is the S.W.A.T. team. if there is trouble within the United States. I feel the protection that we have is the best of the best and we have security forces that are ready for anything.

Our country follows democracy and is ruled with laws that give its citizens freedom to express. It makes our country fair and just as compared to other nations. The President of the United States is considered the most powerful leader in the world. Our justice system enforces laws that help keep peace and calm within the country and prevents crime. 

My country means many things to me. It is a place that I call home, is a place where I was born, is a place where I have freedom. I am fortunate to be living in this country and love my motherland. I am really proud of my country.

Halloween

            Halloween is one of my favorite holidays. The best part about is the part when you go around the houses to get the candy. Some kids would disagree because they would like to have the candy only. The only reason I look forward to halloween is to get a plastic sword. I want a sword because then I will be able to learn how spar with a plastic sword. I can't wait for Halloween.